the curly letter swosch fits the subject. Nice way to put the body text. But maybe some more variation could make it even better..?/Sofia N Djerf
better.script fits the subject matter as stated in the comment from sofia.would like to see the text blocks relate to the display typopgraphy better.they seem to just sit there in no relation at all to what you're doing with the display face.also, nice square up.but, do you really want to do a square up with this project?a question, not disagreeing.keep going.text blocks could be a lot more interesting.and, have you used twelve fonts?g.
one more thing:fashion weeks text block is too heavy.you need to figure that differently.also, now that i look again, have you used typography that is expected for this topic?the script, for instance?is this the way this season's fashion really looks or is this the way it's been portrayed for a long time?may want to think about how you're talking current fashion since that seems to be what you're doing.don't you want your layouts to suggest/talk about what's really on the runway this season?g.
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the curly letter swosch fits the subject. Nice way to put the body text. But maybe some more variation could make it even better..?
/Sofia N Djerf
better.
script fits the subject matter as stated in the comment from sofia.
would like to see the text blocks relate to the display typopgraphy better.
they seem to just sit there in no relation at all to what you're doing with the display face.
also, nice square up.
but, do you really want to do a square up with this project?
a question, not disagreeing.
keep going.
text blocks could be a lot more interesting.
and, have you used twelve fonts?
g.
one more thing:
fashion weeks text block is too heavy.
you need to figure that differently.
also, now that i look again, have you used typography that is expected for this topic?
the script, for instance?
is this the way this season's fashion really looks or is this the way it's been portrayed for a long time?
may want to think about how you're talking current fashion since that seems to be what you're doing.
don't you want your layouts to suggest/talk about what's really on the runway this season?
g.
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